kanos
VIP
4 years ago
Recommended
Definitely one of the better reads here story wise. There's some issues to overcome while reading it, but the mix of sci-fi and fantasy is a great hook.
One MAJOR thing that detracts from this otherwise awesome novel though, is that is finished, been finished for a while, and has editing flaws left and right.
Please for the love of freaking God, once finished TOUCH IT UP! This is now a PAID novel, restricted by vip and purchase walls. There's no reason it should be left with massively glaring editorial flaws when users have to pay for it!!!
Otherwise, yes this a great novel with a ton of story building, works building, and interesting characters. It can be slow, but with trudging through the info dumps for the awesome content.
One MAJOR thing that detracts from this otherwise awesome novel though, is that is finished, been finished for a while, and has editing flaws left and right.
Please for the love of freaking God, once finished TOUCH IT UP! This is now a PAID novel, restricted by vip and purchase walls. There's no reason it should be left with massively glaring editorial flaws when users have to pay for it!!!
Otherwise, yes this a great novel with a ton of story building, works building, and interesting characters. It can be slow, but with trudging through the info dumps for the awesome content.