HellRaZoR
5 years ago
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EditedRecommended
The story definitely has potential, but there's a problem. The chapters or the writing style of the author to be more precise is too wordy. There is too much of describing that not necessarily relates to world building. The MC is not the dumbest in my opinion and it's not like the other martial arts novels. In this one Martial arts come in a bit late. After reading a few chapters you'll feel tired due to the whole describing. Anyway, the pacing of the story is not fast of anyone's wondering. It is a good read but might no be so for everyone.
Update - After completing book-2 I realised that it only gets better, there is reasonable character development. Just give it a try and cope up with the first few chapters and then the novel gets good.
Try it already!
Update - After completing book-2 I realised that it only gets better, there is reasonable character development. Just give it a try and cope up with the first few chapters and then the novel gets good.
Try it already!