sas500
4 years ago
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EditedNot recommended
the writer is the greatest Jedi I have ever seen.
you can fill your time as its a casual daily life type story but still, there is better stuff to read.
not blaming the writer though, it's his first story which he released in his 23s, we all have one or two of them which we wrote casually during highschool.
characters feel empty and unreal. the plot is extremely forced and romance is like absolute trash. sry, I couldn't hold back here. the main character is the worst of all. he changes moods, attitude, etc (well, he eats like Luffy but that's all).
system of power doesn't make the slightest bit of sense as the author changes his mind again and again in the first few chapters. plot armor is none-existence as there is no true foe for overpowered mc as he defeats someone in a higher realm of power. but the author has tried to cover this by making mc tie with someone in a lower realm. so unreasonable.
fighting scenes are ok at best. you need a good deal of experience to imagine the fighting scenes. well, they won't take more than a single paragraph so no complain XD.
this is my 38s novel and if you haven't already read 38 novels then there is still better stuff to read than this because this certainly gets the wort score among my arsenal. oh w8, I give the worst score to MGA, that young-master-beater plot loop was an absolute suffer.
you can fill your time as its a casual daily life type story but still, there is better stuff to read.
not blaming the writer though, it's his first story which he released in his 23s, we all have one or two of them which we wrote casually during highschool.
characters feel empty and unreal. the plot is extremely forced and romance is like absolute trash. sry, I couldn't hold back here. the main character is the worst of all. he changes moods, attitude, etc (well, he eats like Luffy but that's all).
system of power doesn't make the slightest bit of sense as the author changes his mind again and again in the first few chapters. plot armor is none-existence as there is no true foe for overpowered mc as he defeats someone in a higher realm of power. but the author has tried to cover this by making mc tie with someone in a lower realm. so unreasonable.
fighting scenes are ok at best. you need a good deal of experience to imagine the fighting scenes. well, they won't take more than a single paragraph so no complain XD.
this is my 38s novel and if you haven't already read 38 novels then there is still better stuff to read than this because this certainly gets the wort score among my arsenal. oh w8, I give the worst score to MGA, that young-master-beater plot loop was an absolute suffer.